I looked at her face again, I originally like black eyes but children and animation in general are expressive, and through research characters for a younger audience have bigger eyes, so I want to make the girl as expressive as possible - which I don't believe can be done with black button eyes.
I like number 3 for the face
I also had another look at body proportions and dressed her up a bit, I like her in numbers 1, 3 and possibly 5.
I also adjusted the Bog Goblins colour and put him in his swimming costume :)
All feedback is welcome