Sunday, 10 November 2013

Mise en scene Film Review: Edward Scissorhands

1 comment:

  1. Hi Rosalyn,

    You are nearly there now with the referencing! :) Just have another look at which bits need to be in italics, and which bits need to be in round or square brackets...

    Make sure that you actually mention the images by their figure numbers rather than just 'see below'; that way you can be more specific in your discussion - so for example, ' as shown in figure 4'.
    You have a bit of a contradiction going on, with regard to the influence of the 60s... you mention the pastel-coloured set, but then go on to talk about the vivid, clashing colours of the 60s. The pastel colours are actually influenced by the 50s...
    Good discussion around consumerism and the Stepford tone of the community!